Entrepreneur Magazine article

Download Walt Disney magazine Download Bill Gates magazine

In the second week of the business diploma we wrote two magazine articles about two entrepreneurs, these are the magazine articles of Walt Disney and Bill gates.

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From Mr Whymark:

The strength in your article lies in your evaluation of the impact both entrepreneurs had on society. However, you needed to explain how they made their businesses improve. You need overall to use more examples to illustrate your points